Evolution of my paper

My paper didnt really change too much from my first draft to my third. The idea stayed the same but I decided to elaborate more on a more specific point of view in my last draft. I wanted to make it more of a personal experience than I had it as in my other drafts.  I noticed that some people chose to go a bit more formal and some went a bit more casual than I did. Some only did two drafts and some did three. I really think that doing three drafts helped a lot. Because in my first draft was one side of how I felt, and in my second draft was a completely opposite side. After the conference, I realized exactly how I should bring them both together into one final draft. I am pretty pleased with how it turned out. I was a bit nervous about my overall organization of the essay because of the fact that I merged two ideas together in the end, but from what my peers told me about the final product, it came out pretty decent. I think if  I worked a little bit longer on my first draft, the final copy may have been a little more detailed than it is now. If I decide to edit this one again, which I probably will, my goal will be to add a lot more details. And add even more personal feelings about the topic. I expressed how I felt but I think I could have added a little bit more emotion into it, because it is a topic I care and am passionate about.

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