last blog post! :)

After reviewing my essays and trying to decide which one that I want to use to discuss, I had a very easy decision.

My research essay is about cocaine addiction and I find the topic extremely interesting, I don’t know how many other people do, but it is something that is appealing to me and i feel that if i am passionate about it then that is good enough for me.

In order to make this essay more complete and polished i need to cite my sources. I totally forgot to include citations in my drafts and that is pretty bad haha. I need to make my paragraph transitions a lot smoother as well. I feel that i just jump from paragraph to paragraph without any connectors to link them together.

I think it demonstrates a lot of progress in my writing because I sound a lot more technical in my writing than i did in the beginning of the year. That was actually one of my goals for this semester and I think I might have achieved it.