last blog post! :)
December 2, 2009 at 2:55 am 2 comments
After reviewing my essays and trying to decide which one that I want to use to discuss, I had a very easy decision.
My research essay is about cocaine addiction and I find the topic extremely interesting, I don’t know how many other people do, but it is something that is appealing to me and i feel that if i am passionate about it then that is good enough for me.
In order to make this essay more complete and polished i need to cite my sources. I totally forgot to include citations in my drafts and that is pretty bad haha. I need to make my paragraph transitions a lot smoother as well. I feel that i just jump from paragraph to paragraph without any connectors to link them together.
I think it demonstrates a lot of progress in my writing because I sound a lot more technical in my writing than i did in the beginning of the year. That was actually one of my goals for this semester and I think I might have achieved it.
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jjsx0x | December 2, 2009 at 2:04 pm
Yeah dont worry i totally forgot to do citations also. I think you should deff stick with your topic because you have such a passion for knowing this. The research will be alot easier because you want to do it instead of feeling like you have to
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vickyagudo | December 7, 2009 at 4:10 pm
I also forgot to put n citations! I agree with Jlllian and you should stick with your tpi because it is very interestig and I think that everybody else will also be interested in it